"And you seem to reel around my head." Oh, how I can relate to that feeling.

Very well-written and aesthetic. (:

clever imagery ;)

"My head is like a goldfish bowl.
And you’re the goldfish."

aw, what a cute concept.
I like how even when you're writing something totally sugarsweetlove adorable,
it has an edge.

nice work.

Short, but meaningful. Nice job. Love the first two lines. :)