Oh I love this.

It's very reminiscent of Francesca Lia Block's writing somehow. I like how I I can recognize myself in some of the lines since we all go through a phase like that when we're young. Your style of writing is so fun and gorgeous and heartfelt. Take care.

Haha I can relate to that... Except I'll never be a teenybopper lol...
Interesting, I like it :]

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skate-bait boy? oh, way cute.

this is very francesca lia block-esque, but... different, at the same time. I can't explain it, but I'm glad it wasn't just an imitation piece. I could hear your voice.

"she doesn’t exactly know why she likes him but she wants to tell him to marry her now goddamit" oh, dalring, that's lovely. I especially love the second paragraph, too.

more please?

Feels kind of cutesy because you use great words to make it that way (i.e. baby chick, skate-bait boy and lovely nice.) The idea I get from it is that even girls who seem a little silly and shallow still feel really deeply. I like a lot of the phrases you use - my favourite was 'and sometimes says the most romantic things without even realizing it'.

Cute! It really reminds me of Francesca Lia Block. I love riding shopping carts in the parking lot outside the grocery store late at night with my friends too. :P

Super Cute! (love) One shot, or more?

obviously i read them! and i have this slight hunch that this isnt non-fiction...
xo

i really love this.

wow... I have mixed emotions left over from it... but I liked the way it was written. really cool...