hey there,

Although this seems an old story, just thought I'd let you know that your vampires are banging. It's unfortunate that the brothers are such twisted little things because generally I prefer love over sadism and, really, everybody loves decadent!vampire!orgies.

Kale is a sweetheart. Sorry I couldn't pick who the characters were named after!

Oh, I like this a lot! I do hope you continue it :)

Lawl, vampires. No matter how sexily intimidating they are, they always make me laugh. Especially in gay vamp romance, because I can't for the life of me figure out how they're supposed to get it up. Then again, I suppose that would depend on how much blood the vamp(s) in question has drunk and how long it's been since they drank.
That said - this is proof of why writing reviews at half past one in the morning is a bad idea; you end up getting sidetracked all over the place - this is not my kind of story. I'm not into the whole dark, sexay Gothic vamp story, for some reason. I blame Anne Rice.
Elias has potential to become a really interesting character if he gets some growing space - which he prolly will get cos of the Plot - and Adin makes me think of Aion of Chrono Crusade, only this guy's more of a sex fiend.
You have some comma-abuse and a tendency to write using run-on sentences, which can be a bit hard to follow at times - re: 01:30 in the morning - but this is nothing that isn't easily fixed.
You also use a lot of adverbs - remember to show instead of telling once in a while. ;)
Hope none of this stung too much. ._.
- Aibari

Kale seems like a really good guy until the last sentence about Elias and then it kinda seems very suspicious. I like it though. :)

Merry Christmas!

Aye, indeed, it did take a rather wild turn; but nothing really out there, no worries. It was a good chapter, I don't know what you're fussing about! It's probably just because its a huge piece of plot that has started rolling and maybe you're just nervous and worried that it came out right. And it certainly did from this standpoint!

Whoot for Kale and his tricks. And now we're off to the four corners of the earth for vampirey things!

Like I say, great chapter, love. There is absolutely nothing wrong with it; writing is great, it moves the plot along, and you juggle the room-full of characters well.

this looks really good! i hope that ur ideas are put to the keyboard again really soon!

Oo new characters! And ze plot, she thickens.

And a 'uniform of sorts' hey? What? A school girl outfit? -gigglesnort- Shame on me.

Good to see you're still working on this one, too. Oh, hey, I noticed something I have to ask about; you used the term 'kiss' as their group right? Is that a copyright word to Hamilton? It just pinged my curiousity.

Hm, I like Kale. And bath scenes are always fun. Bastian not so much.

lol great updated, dear! Sorry it took me forever to come R&R!

Oh darlin', I love the slash. Always do, and always will. I love the descriptions and the raw emotions, they lend a very sexually gothic touch, of which I am such a fan. And I liked how you would switch from the submissive to the dominant, though I can still see your preference for submission. You will have to keep me posted about updates and such.

Aha... yes.. *puts towel over keyboard to stop the drool*

“I see you still sleep in decadence,”

Still love that line, you know.

Ahem. Delightful as always and as I've stated muchly before; I do love it. You just had to start it off with the mansex and get us all hooked hey? For shame. And yet I love it ;P

Am eagerly awaiting the next chapter and such promised hints you've dropped me. Hurry I say, hurry! Although... Faith and False Hopes for Better Days needs to be updated too. Can I shorten the title to like... FFHBD? Or just Faith? lol

Much love, sunshine! Thank you too for being my editor- my uber fast, finished as soon as its sent editor! -heart-

Love for ze ErrorAuthor ^.^

Very nice read. I enjoy the names you've used and I particularly loved this part - The man had curls that spilled across eyes that must’ve once been warm and soulful but were devoid of emotion, and when he opened his arms Elias hadn’t been able to stop himself from stepping into them. He hadn’t even been able to stop the man, ‘Adin’, a voice in his head had whispered, when the pearly white fangs descended into his flesh. There had been a squelching sound, followed by the familiar gulping sound of someone who was truly thirsty, to the point of dehydration. He could feel Adin’s breath against his neck and found that odd, he’d never thought vampire’s could breath…he’d never thought vampire’s existed. - Who knew getting bit by a vampire could be so hot?? haha! Can't wait to read more! :D