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| Abdul Alhazred - John Brewe... 2008-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseGah! What a great feeling of being trapped! Ayah! Ach, this good! Word to the wise. I would throw around more verbs and make a big mess if it were me because I like messy free verse, but hey! This is a sweet Haiku Storm you have going here and I have to go picture wide open spaces for a while. nice work |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseWell written poem. Great job! Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |