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| Seeker of Knowledge 2008-07-21 ch 1,  | abuselol i love this story... its so random never stop writing (>^) Eleri (^ |
| MiddiVampira 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuse*Sweat-drop* if you've read or seen anime/manga you know what that manes. LOL that was the funiiest piece of insanity as you called it ever. LOVED it though, and I'm laughing. nice job Middi~ |
| sunshower 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseLol this is fantastic. I absolutely love the lead character, and the concept is brilliant. |
| Kalika G 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely brilliant! Honestly speaking, I've read a lot of your stuff, and liked it, but that was a stroke of genius. It's convinced me to make an effort to read the rest of your one-shots. And I'd definitely be thrilled to see more. |
| Lisa 2008-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseBAHAHAHAHAHAA. I'm in class, and I peed myself laughing. -.-" Why'd you have to make it so funny?? ^^ Enjoyed it, you need to write more of these humourous one-shots. I'll never think of Santa as the good old jolly man again! :P Woot. You made my day with this. Lisa |
| Charlotte-Stevens 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuse"No genius has ever existed without some touch of madness" Rather interesting ;) You've done well with striking a good balance with your descriptiveness, and appear to have a good range of vocabulary which makes it even better :) Keep it up! ~ Charlotte |
| Hed in the Cloudz 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is hilarious! Written very well, with only a few confusing sentences when Santa is introduced as Satan. I'd like to point out, though, that Santa is relatively new, having been introduced by Coca Cola, so I may be missing something, but I didn't think that it was thousands of years. Oh, and shouldn't it be Christmas Eve? Anyways, I loved it. Thank you! |
| aDATEwithAdream 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abusethat was interesting, to say the least |
| krazynclutz 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abusei LOVE this! so very crazy! u must have been hiigh on sugar when u wrote this!! |
| Saranya 2007-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL...that was HILARIOUS. I love parodies. As long as they're not too long. Parodies that are the size of full-length novels annoy me. But yeah, that was funny. |
| pasify 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abusecongratulations on your imagination. No offense here but I think it is kinda insane and non-logical! haha...but it's funny anyway! Maybe you can put this under the fantasy category too! |
| Lady E 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseIt's brilliant how ideas come about, and yours are always stunningly executed. I love the idea behind this; poking fun at the modern world never gets old. But more than that. Wow, Myrika. Your writing here, offbeat, plain, sweeps me away. The description of Mary-Lou, her -name-, is really great. You have a way with capturing characters. The dialogue, as always, is impeccable. I really, really enjoyed this. |
| freakyAngel 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseThis totally takes the cake. Oh God, I can't stop laughing. |
| chocolatechipash 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseLMFAO, thats hilarious. u should do more of these they are really good. are u dating LIB? lol |
| Anon 2007-09-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseUm... Interesting, if a tad hyperbole but it put me (at one point) in mind of a song, have you ever heard of Tom Lehrer? The song's called 'A Christmas Carol'... Christmas time is here, by golly, Disapproval would be folly, Deck the halls with hunks of holly, Fill the cup and don't say "when." Kill the turkeys, ducks and chickens, Mix the punch, drag out the Dickens, Even though the prospect sickens, Brother, here we go again. On Christmas Day you can't get sore, Your fellow man you must adore, There's time to rob him all the more The other three hundred and sixty-four. Relations, sparing no expense'll Send some useless old utensil, Or a matching pen and pencil. "Just the thing I need! How nice!" It doesn't matter how sincere it Is, nor how heartfelt the spirit, Sentiment will not endear it, What's important is the price. Hark the Herald Tribune sings, Advertising wondrous things. God rest ye merry, merchants, May you make the Yuletide pay. Angels we have heard on high Tell us to go out and buy! So let the raucous sleigh bells jingle, Hail our dear old friend Kris Kringle, Driving his reindeer across the sky. Don't stand underneath when they fly by. |