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I love the idea that an ordinary waitress can save everyone from Armageddon. I also love your villainous Santa very much.

It's my humble opinion that there should be more Mary-Lou the diner waitress stories out there. She's obviously the chosen one to save the world. (More, there must always be more).
I love all your other stories, too, but this one is fairly different, and I like it! :D

lol i love this story... its so random

never stop writing
(>^) Eleri (^

*Sweat-drop* if you've read or seen anime/manga you know what that manes. LOL that was the funiiest piece of insanity as you called it ever. LOVED it though, and I'm laughing.
nice job
Middi~

Lol this is fantastic. I absolutely love the lead character, and the concept is brilliant.

That was absolutely brilliant! Honestly speaking, I've read a lot of your stuff, and liked it, but that was a stroke of genius.
It's convinced me to make an effort to read the rest of your one-shots. And I'd definitely be thrilled to see more.

BAHAHAHAHAHAA. I'm in class, and I peed myself laughing. -.-" Why'd you have to make it so funny??

^^ Enjoyed it, you need to write more of these humourous one-shots. I'll never think of Santa as the good old jolly man again!

:P

Woot. You made my day with this.

Lisa

"No genius has ever existed without some touch of madness"

Rather interesting ;) You've done well with striking a good balance with your descriptiveness, and appear to have a good range of vocabulary which makes it even better :)
Keep it up!

~ Charlotte

This is hilarious! Written very well, with only a few confusing sentences when Santa is introduced as Satan. I'd like to point out, though, that Santa is relatively new, having been introduced by Coca Cola, so I may be missing something, but I didn't think that it was thousands of years. Oh, and shouldn't it be Christmas Eve? Anyways, I loved it. Thank you!

that was interesting, to say the least

i LOVE this! so very crazy! u must have been hiigh on sugar when u wrote this!!

LOL...that was HILARIOUS. I love parodies. As long as they're not too long. Parodies that are the size of full-length novels annoy me.

But yeah, that was funny.

congratulations on your imagination. No offense here but I think it is kinda insane and non-logical! haha...but it's funny anyway! Maybe you can put this under the fantasy category too!

It's brilliant how ideas come about, and yours are always stunningly executed. I love the idea behind this; poking fun at the modern world never gets old. But more than that. Wow, Myrika. Your writing here, offbeat, plain, sweeps me away. The description of Mary-Lou, her -name-, is really great. You have a way with capturing characters. The dialogue, as always, is impeccable. I really, really enjoyed this.