Reviews for Don't Make A Scene

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Alyson.xox 2008-07-24 ch 19,	abuseGreat Story, My favourite chapter was the second last one. It was adorable when Ryan and Lacey finally got together =) I love your writing style, its a lot more matture then many stories I've read on fictionpress. :) I look forward to reading more stories from you! =D
MiscellaneousMe 2008-07-23 ch 19,	abuseWow... This was great I loved the ending..
xXTwiligherXx 2008-07-23 ch 19,	abuseI loved this story =)
TurtleGoddess 2008-07-23 ch 1,	abuseI am instantly in like with this story! The narrator is likable and all of the characters so far have been realistic and intriguing. I definitely want to know what's going on with Ryan! And I am happy to find a story with a character who likes Imogen Heap, of course. Now I'm on to read more...
Bleeding Rose Petals 2008-07-20 ch 19,	abuseVery good story. I like how you didn't take the conventional route by breaking Jackson and Lacey up right away. There seemed to be a slight discrepancy in the story because Jackson was still on crutches at opening night even though at that point he should have been off. I wonder why we didn't get to know the exact point that Jackson got off his crutches and no one said anything when he started walking on his own again.
geminibaby6789 2008-07-19 ch 10,	abuseThanks for the story! I love it so far! Ryan is so weird! :)
Feel The Waltz 2008-07-17 ch 19,	abuseJust thought i'd leave a review. I enjoyed yor story :)
sew.what32 2008-07-12 ch 1,	abusesounds good cant wait to read more!
GrannyP 2008-07-07 ch 19,	abuseYES! I actually read it! After months and months of hearing all about how awesome SamanthaNicole is and how I really HAD to read her stuff, I actually read a full story! I can't remember who told me this, but it's true. The part about your stuff being good, not about me actually reading it... that wouldn't make sense, now would it? Overall it was pretty good with some shocks and twisters in there. Ryan was SO mean in the beginning (almost TOO mean, it was a bit hard to believe) but likable enough at the end. Impressive. I am so tired now; I don't know if anything I have written in this review actually makes up a real sentence! Well, thanks for writing such a cute story!
GrannyP 2008-07-07 ch 16,	abuseThat was horrible! Horrible as in 'OMG why can't I turn away and now something bad has happened to this poor girl and I can totally relate and know exactly how hard it is to lose a parent when you weren't on the best terms and now it's all my fault' kind of way. Yeah, I make no sense I know. But I just had to comment about this one, even though I have been on a role and totally slacking with the reviews. Aw, Ryan was so sweet.
GrannyP 2008-07-07 ch 8,	abuseOkay, so I totally lied and skipped reviewing a couple of chapters, but I have a very good excuse of which I will spare you the details. But the whole time she was at his house, I kept thinking of a million things she could have done to mess with him, and she didn't do anything! It was rather disappointing. I mean, not even putting mayonnaise in his tube of toothpaste? How could she resist the temptation? I wanted to punch him when she'd been locked out of the house, but at least she got back in before the parents got home. Anyway, great chapters, and I can't wait to read more!
Colie Rae 2008-07-07 ch 19,	abuseI enjoyed the story. Some parts were a bit frazzled, as if a chapter did not even need to be in the story but honestly, I don't have a specific example for you. I think the mother's death, in the same way as Ryan and Jackson was a bit over the top. I think you should have kept the mother around and created more drama without her completely falling apart and losing her family. I did like the story though and I loved the setting.
GrannyP 2008-07-07 ch 5,	abuseHa! Still so funny. Not much to add to this chapter from me. I'm in a hurry now! But yeah, someone definitely needs to slap Ryan around, even though it is kind of cute seeing how he acts. It's like a 5th grader who likes the girl but pretends to hate them just to cover it up. Yeah, definitely some jealousy issues going on when Jackson's around. Okay, I must stop rambling now.
GrannyP 2008-07-07 ch 4,	abuseWell, the whole floor pretty much knows about my slackiness now, thanks to the hilarity of this chapter that caused my extremely loud burst of laughter. Okay, so it wasn't that bad, and half the people on this floor don't even know me or care what I am doing here. Anyway... Talk about the most embarrassing thing EVER! I would have transferred schools. And I am NEVER going to a party or drinking EVER just to be extra careful that nothing like that would ever happen to me. Sure was funny to read about though.
GrannyP 2008-07-07 ch 3,	abuseUgh. Nothing about parties has ever interested me, and this is exactly why. But what was up with Ryan anyway, looking out for her like that? Aw, I know, mean guy turning soft. He'll probably just use it against her later. At least, I hope he does... because I am evil like that. Oh yeah, great chapter.

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