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| wizkid08 2008-05-11 ch 2,  | abuseJesus. Boy needs to be taken out. Good writing, though. I can't wait to find out what happens. |
| Mellifluence 2008-05-10 ch 19, | abuseOverdramatic? Definitely. Totally cliche? Without a doubt. But when the writing's this good... well, what else do you need? ^^ |
| rjdickert 2008-05-08 ch 19, | abuseawesome story, i liked how things related and connected from one chapter to the next. the only thing is that the ending seemed too happy and goody-good to me, i don't know, just my opinion, other than that it was great! :) ~rjdickert |
| tiger_lily9240 2008-05-08 ch 19, anon. | abuseOMG! Ok..Apart From The Fact That My Name Is Also Cheyenne... I LOVED YOUR STORY! =D It's Amazing!! It's Brilliant... |
| shannyn 2008-05-07 ch 19, | abuseThis was one of the best fp stories I've read. Thank you for writing and posting it =) Ps. You didn't rush it at all. I can't stand when stories drag on, but I feel like...yours was - just right. =] |
| Georgianna 2008-05-07 ch 19, anon. | abuseI can definitely see why 'Don't Make a Scene' won SKOW! The story flows really smoothly and the characters retained their characteristics. Reading this really made me envious, it really is every girl's dream to find their other half. Lacey and Ryan really do just seem to fit right. I'll be looking forward to your current stories and any future ones! |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 19, | abuseaw ryan is so sweet! im so glad shes staying and they re going to the same college!! yay =]] |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 18, | abuse=]] yay im so happy lol |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 17, | abuse=/ this almost makes me cry lol and where are they going? |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 16, | abuseomg! =/ i cant believe she died =// at least ryan was there for her =] |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 15, | abuselol yay he laughed =] |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 14, | abuselol aww they kissed |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 13, | abusethat wasnt a good way for ryan's mom to die =/ |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 12, | abusewoah theyre getting married again?! sucks for her |
| righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 11, | abuselol cute |