for some strange reason, this is my favorite. all the poems are like, really good. but for some reason this one touched me the most so far.

"Cold-hearted woman and warm-hearted man,
Cold-hearted woman who broke him and ran.

A superflous action that left one to breed hate,
One calls it destiny while another calls it fate..."


i loved these lines so much.
kudos.

Wow. It's been a while. I believe we were friends on Myspace, too, we should totally do that again. And thanks for the reviews. I actually like a lot of my haikus.

The lingering apathy in this poem, like in the 6th verse, goes really well with the meter. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but I like it.