Reviews for Look Me In The Eye

Twilight Starr
2007-10-09
ch 1,

abuseIt does sound like lyrics. Honest and agreeable perspective. Well written poem.

~Twilight Starr~

AshleyLGormley
2007-09-21
ch 1,

abuseThis did initially come across to me as possible song lyrics, but that doesn't take away from your work at all. I liked how this poem feels like it came straight from the unfiltered thought process of this "girl" [which I presume may be you since you used "I" throughout, but I could be wrong] while she's alone with this guy after she found out. The language is repetitious and gives the sense that "her" thinking is going in anxious circles as she looks to him for the answers to her questions. Seems fitting to me.

Feel free to check out/ review some of my stuff, if you'd like! Just posted two recently written poems. =]

Sincerely,
Ashley

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