Though not as poetically beautiful as the blunt poetry of your recent works, the metaphors and catching phrases of this one deserve some well bought attention :)

Oh, wow! I enjoy the fantastical imagery and language. "Traps her starlight in the past." That line is just: ::sigh!:: gorgeous. =]

Feel free to check out my stuff and review if you'd like! Just posted two recent poems up, myself.

Take care!

Sincerely,
Ashley