One of the best stories i've read, i like how it's very different to others. Please continue and get the next chapter out quickly as possible please!! x)

I really enjoyed reading this! I like the characters you have, the fact there's a backstory {not many people bother with that part; this was a nice change}, and the creativity with the plot. And I can't forget the writing skills, of course. It was a pleasure to read what you've got up to now, and I hope there will be more. :)

|Meduza|

i can't wait for all these secrets to be revealed. and it's so sad for Giest that the other Children don't particularly like him. but i am enjoying this story and it's suspense. it's an awesome concept.

Theres quite a number of twists here, I love it!

love it! keep updating, please. :)

Yay, a new chapter. It was really good. Such suspence, with the doctor and all. Can't wait to read the next chapter =0)

I absolutely adore your creativity in making this story, right now. It's like--hmm, how to say this? Original. But we all know that originality is an undetected form of plagiarism. lol. But, yeah.

I like Mischa--Geist, whatever the Hell is his name. Although he's a pretty complex character, I never figured out until chapter six, that he was the Child of Body AND Spirit. Huh. Wonder what it's like to have two gifts? Must be pretty hard. I'm surprised he's not a schizophrenic or something.

The rest of the Children are a bit rowdy for my taste. Fugue, Pneuma, and Carmine are all right, but Toro, Tatsache, and Felis are pretty crazy--in the good way.

What I really don't like about Mischa situation, is that everyone wants a piece of his **. I want it too, but Dr. Rowe is such a pervert. He should seriously enlist good help if he wants to capture Geist. Yeah, I'm glad that Laurel was there. But I didn't quite understand the end of chapter 7.

I realy hope that Laurel saves Mischa. It'd be sad if he didn't. ;[

when I first started reading this chapter I was confused. Who's Geist? Then I remember that Mischa. Stupid me.
Did Laurel save him? Or did the evil Dr Rowe get him.
I'm dieing now for the next chapter to see what happened.

DUN DUN DUN! Nice ending. Cliff-hangers are my favourite yet I hate them... :D
It's weird thinking of him as Geist... I'm kinda confused - is he the child of spirit or body? Or is this a deliberate confusion? Also I kinda think you need to explain more about hunters and the children in respect to the 'normal' world. Does everyone know of them etc.
Nice chapter though. Just some constructive criticisms.
cya next chapter,
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hm, that's very interesting and I think someone's rescuing him! :) love the story. Everyone probably knows he's a child of the body now though or at least someone does. That should be interesting to see how everyone reacts to that. I have a feeling it won't be good, but I hope you update soon. It's good!

Oh, his new name isn't as good as him actually one, but I'll survive I suppose. I doesn't seem fair though that even among people with supernatural powers he's still an outcast. I feel bad for him,but it should be interesting with all the children of eve together. The ceremony in itself was cool too, but seemed a little excessive. Good story!

Wow. Great chapter. Can't wait to read more, as always ;).

Aw, I really like Laurel now! Nice style of writing (as usual :P)
I love this story - it's really unique! Great idea, well done. Can't wait until the next update!
cya soon,
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oh! this is very fun! I wanna read some more! It's a great story. Really it is. Update soon!!

ha ha ha. ooh Mischa, you bad boy! *hearts*