|Reviews for Conditional freedom|
| AK the Twilight 6/12/08 . chapter 1
It may be me, but I don't understand the connection between being a hero and suffering from such a punishment. Maybe it's the emphasis on crime, but there has to be a clearer way to portray this. I like the descriptions like "salty tears" and "if I was your ambrosia." The whole poem could've used a few more. Then again, this is a song, which contained the song mechanics well. I can see the chorus and the whole thing is well-organized.
Overall, good job.
| Twilight Starr 11/8/07 . chapter 1
Beautifully poem. Nice work.
| AuraBorealis 9/28/07 . chapter 1
nice work. is this a song?
| angeloftheninthorder 9/21/07 . chapter 1
Filled with emotion and thought provoking. I praise your work.