interesting.
I'm not entirely sure I understand, but it was pretty interesting.
I'm kind of hoping I'll understand it sooner or later.

Another story that is probably a little too deep for me. I like the way you name the people. The ending is cool.

It was so... cute!

But really gory at the same time. I liked the dialogue, and the shonen ai bit was sweet.

I feel so much happier now!

Great story. It's original. The last line is hopeful for him at least. Interesting title. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

wowzers, crazy dream. i haven't had a good one in awhile. kind of reminds me of the Illusionist...except...not. duh. anyway. nice that you can be diligant enough to write that stuff down, i always forget my best dreams.

Wow. Dreams can give you a lot of inspiration. That was weird where he lifted the decay corspe off the bearded man.

~SirScott

Oh, the wonders of the right hemisphere!

A few grammatical errors/typos (things in [] should be taken out, things in () should be added):
'This is a cheap theater, it[']s rent is probably less than fourty sous a month'

'Everything about him shakes and shudders with effort.'- 'shakes and sudders' is redundant.

While not a grammatical error, I had to read twice the passage where the (singular) dove becomes (plural) rabbits. Well, it's magic, I guess.

'One burly man with a large beard stands up[,] (.) "I fear nothing."'


'They will never recover until the final act where my love will cleanse their souls. It is the final act.'- again, not a grammatical error exactly, but the final act comes so quickly that I don't really feel the audiance's horror.

'he rambles in a showman's voice'- perhaps you could replace 'rambles' with 'rumbles'? Because showmen generally don't ramble- it isn't very good for showing.

Anyway- since I can't really tell what the final act was, I'm a bit up in the air with the story. But congratulations to you subconcious! I hope you'll update this story and clear some things up!