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| xToXiCxFaIrYxEnVyx 2008-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseWow, he sounds so creepy and scary, wouldn't like to meet him in a dark alley :) |
| Abdul Alhazred - John Brewe... 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseHopping in the head of a serial killer is a dangerous business That aside... I know that same happy tune. Good work. Very easy gait, It has a definite arch and a nice finish. Good stories are best described as fine wines. I like Jack. Hmm. He reminds me of a young Lector with such a haphazard way of speaking about the dead. For some weird reason I heard the voice of Gir from Invader Zim when he said, "I feel so happy!" Only a matter of time means I expect to hear from Jack again, once more, very nice and concise. |
| Lady of the Mirror 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWonderful exposition... Jack reminded me of Edward Scissorhands... only... SERIOUSLY disturbed and sinister... =] ~~Lady of the Mirror |
| SugarRayne 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseNice. It feels like some odd combination of the novel "Darkly Dreaming Dexter" (which I highly recommend) and "Edward Scissorhands". At least, that's what I'm envisioning as I read this. Beautiful job, keep up the great work. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseOriginal piece. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| dangelicessence 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseWow. I like it, especially the ending. Jack *snicker snicker*. Anyway, I actually like your poem-ish style; it works with this piece and adds to its beauty. Yes, I do think it's beautiful. The way it's composed, the way it flows, I think it's lovely and has found its way to my favorite's list^^. |