 Harmonic Discord 2009-08-04 . chapter 39 Heeheehee! This is fabulous. |
 Sarsaparilla 2009-05-29 . chapter 36cute. loved the last line. |
 Shady Spiral 2009-03-31 . chapter 38Poor Buttercup :(
I love this! Its so creative! I will definitely continue reading! |
 Mom 2009-03-30 . chapter 38 Wonderful! Why do I feel like I personally know Mr. Dragon. Have he and I met? ;-) |
 Mom 2009-03-18 . chapter 37 Oh, I love this one.
Just a suggestion.
"He was a huge, chocolate brown with antlers and miniscule wings."
This sentence is awkward as written (and you spelled minuscule wrong)
I would change this to:
He was huge, colored chocolate brown with antlers and minuscule wings"
Same number of words, much smoother to the reading eye.
Love you,
Mom |
 Mom 2009-03-10 . chapter 36 Hurray! Another chapter. It's been awhile. I like this one. You did spell her wrong in the 3rd sentence.
Love u,
Mom |
 Chris Rhyanne 2009-01-09 . chapter 14xD I didn't get Cheese and Crackers at first, but now that I do, I think it may be my favorite. Poor museum curator. Keep up the good work. |
 Seven Feathers 2008-12-25 . chapter 34Hm...an odd blend of humour and seriousness, modernization and old themes. Very quirky, and just as interesting. |
 lael1bologna 2008-11-12 . chapter 7hahaha! Your killing me!! *dies with laughter* |
 lael1bologna 2008-11-12 . chapter 4haha! I loved the last line! "it's too bad he was nearsighted and didn't see that cliff!" hahaha! I love it! |
 Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-10-21 . chapter 7I suppose all dragons have their secret, soft sides... |
 Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-10-21 . chapter 5Aw poor Coral. You know these are very clever. What a fantastic idea! |
 Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-10-21 . chapter 4Ahaha these are great! |
 Fractured Illusion 2008-10-19 . chapter 34It is with disgust that I squeal, haha. Very imaginative food, so imaginative it made me go "ew".
Btw I like how you make the dragon world come so alive. I rarely see dragon societies and whatnot. Its time they get some street cred!
Keep it up!
- Frac, from the Review Marathon (link in profile) check it out if you'd like :) |
 Fractured Illusion 2008-10-19 . chapter 33Newspaper is so cute! Just because of his name but I also like his curiosity.
It's a sad ending though! T_T Me no likey. Poor Newspaper. Poor poor fellow.
- Frac |