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Harmonic Discord 2009-08-04 . chapter 39
Heeheehee! This is fabulous.
Sarsaparilla 2009-05-29 . chapter 36
cute. loved the last line.
Shady Spiral 2009-03-31 . chapter 38
Poor Buttercup :(
I love this! Its so creative! I will definitely continue reading!
Mom 2009-03-30 . chapter 38
Wonderful! Why do I feel like I personally know Mr. Dragon. Have he and I met? ;-)
Mom 2009-03-18 . chapter 37
Oh, I love this one.

Just a suggestion.

"He was a huge, chocolate brown with antlers and miniscule wings."

This sentence is awkward as written (and you spelled minuscule wrong)

I would change this to:

He was huge, colored chocolate brown with antlers and minuscule wings"

Same number of words, much smoother to the reading eye.

Love you,
Mom
Mom 2009-03-10 . chapter 36
Hurray! Another chapter. It's been awhile. I like this one. You did spell her wrong in the 3rd sentence.

Love u,
Mom
Chris Rhyanne 2009-01-09 . chapter 14
xD I didn't get Cheese and Crackers at first, but now that I do, I think it may be my favorite. Poor museum curator. Keep up the good work.
Seven Feathers 2008-12-25 . chapter 34
Hm...an odd blend of humour and seriousness, modernization and old themes. Very quirky, and just as interesting.
lael1bologna 2008-11-12 . chapter 7
hahaha! Your killing me!! *dies with laughter*
lael1bologna 2008-11-12 . chapter 4
haha! I loved the last line! "it's too bad he was nearsighted and didn't see that cliff!" hahaha! I love it!
Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-10-21 . chapter 7
I suppose all dragons have their secret, soft sides...
Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-10-21 . chapter 5
Aw poor Coral. You know these are very clever. What a fantastic idea!
Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-10-21 . chapter 4
Ahaha these are great!
Fractured Illusion 2008-10-19 . chapter 34
It is with disgust that I squeal, haha. Very imaginative food, so imaginative it made me go "ew".

Btw I like how you make the dragon world come so alive. I rarely see dragon societies and whatnot. Its time they get some street cred!

Keep it up!

- Frac, from the Review Marathon (link in profile) check it out if you'd like :)
Fractured Illusion 2008-10-19 . chapter 33
Newspaper is so cute! Just because of his name but I also like his curiosity.

It's a sad ending though! T_T Me no likey. Poor Newspaper. Poor poor fellow.

- Frac
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