Reviews for Living in Dreams - FictionPress.com

xDancingintheRainx 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseThe last stanza was my favorite. I liked the repetition of "Life so pleasant when you're living in a dream" The only thing I'm not so fond of about this piece is that the flow is a little rocky and inconsistent, and I think the word choice could be polished up a bit. But otherwise, nicely done. Thanks for the review.
Emotastic Hannah 2007-09-22 ch 1,	abuseOh wow! Only the second one of yours I read, but I absolutely adore it! ~Emo
Kisei 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseParts of this sound more like formal writing, but then you use "yeah" and "baby," which completely alter the tone. I think it sounds unnatural, especially since its inconsistent. I love the title though; it's one of those that makes me want to read something.