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| sorryaboutthat 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseEven with the sense of fantasy, or maybe unreality is a better word, this ENTIRE poem captures an instant in such a way that it's breath taking. Usually I pick out favorite lines, but I just can't with this one, I love it all. |
| Kissing Concrete 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseright out of a distorted action fantasy movie, as i could see. i loved it. |
| girl without wings 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is impressive and enchanting. I loved every word of this piece. You’ve done an excellent job developing the metaphor of the chandelier. The images in this are as sharp and glittering as broken glass. And those last few lines were perfect. I admire and envy the way you write. Your words have real weight and really transport the reader. You have immense talent and are headed for my favorite authors list. Thank you for sharing this piece and your gift with us. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is just gorgeous. I love the comparison of a girl to glass, all these traits they both possess. The last two lines are just perfection. So nicely done. Keep writing! :) |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseM, I love the transition of imagery in this, and how you stay true to your motif of glass down to subtle expression. Quite intriguing, what I see in my mind's eye. It definitely casts a new perspective on a human condition. Lovely. |
| concerto49 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseHm, I liked the description - different and vivid. It's strong even with the little words. Ha, the ending was cool too. Anyhow. Cheers. |
| Kisei 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseErm, wow. I loved it. You've made my night even if the rest I find is... not so good. |
| Kicking Poe 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseincredibly beautiful, tragic, and delicate. I love the last few lines. cheers. |
| Michael l'oeil fol 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abusewonderfully vivid images...great flow...love the ending...thought provoking and makes anyone who has known anyone so narcissistic grin to themselves...good work Michael |
| andXso SheXpulled theXTrigg... 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI love this. There's so much depth and meaning to it; it's a great piece. ~j. lynn |