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| softersin 2008-07-16 ch 2,  | abuseGood piece. I like the way you wrote drops as d r o p s. Good job ! :) [s-s-softersin] |
| adsaige 2008-07-04 ch 40, | abusei've seem to have fallen behind on your writings. however, i must say that these are very strong and powerful and i can see that which entry your voice has matured. good job!♥ thanks for all the reviews! |
| Laura Elizabeth 2008-06-27 ch 40, | abuseLoved this one. Your imagery is amazing! "His touch feels like a breeze against my face and my weary bones stop aching." That's beautiful. I'm hoping that that's what love feels like. One day the dreams will stop and it will all be real. Until that day, damn reality. It really does suck XD Awesome job, I shall venture into your other works =] -Laura |
| kloun doll 2008-06-24 ch 40, | abuseI like these poems, they're very well written |
| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-06-05 ch 37, | abuseGreat collection! I love how there's a story that sort of flows through all of them. A couple in particular stood out to me... 1-- very real, honest, tangible emotion. 14-- so sweet! I wish someone would say those things about me. 23-- (i was a bit confused about the spacing) beautiful. 34-- so "I am woman, here me roar!" Great. |
| Kadence 2008-05-13 ch 36, | abuseYou make it seem so real, because it is reality, in some sense. :) |
| Kadence 2008-05-13 ch 37, | abuseWhat can I say? Wonderful. |
| NotABanana 2008-05-10 ch 35, | abuseno keep them as a collection! Sorry I haven't reviewed much; my computer time has been crunched as I have a mountain of homework that I continuously put off until the last minute... but I love these poems and you should definitely keep writing them. NotABanana |
| Rainbowelectric 2008-05-10 ch 34, | abuseAh... She's a poet too. This was lovely. Strength, perseverence...and a little bit of "kiss my ass" blended in just for good measure. |
| NotABanana 2008-04-01 ch 30, | abuseWow. Your poems are so... deep. I know that sounds corny, but they are. They have meaning and heart behind them. It's cool that you're able to write about real things, and events. |
| Kadence 2008-03-29 ch 29, | abuseYou leave me speechless every time, but in a good way. :) |
| Sophelia 2008-03-13 ch 14, | abusei haven't read all of them yet, but i have to say this one struck a chord with me today. do you write these when you're feeling a certain way? there are so many i can relate to. very cathartic. i like it =] |
| hand-carved 2008-03-12 ch 26, anon. | abusewell of course his touch would be such as that. i really like this one. it's very good. |
| adsaige 2008-03-09 ch 25, | abusei've read all the latest chapters of this, and i might say, i'm hella impressed. i think that these are the strongest and best pieces so far. |
| Kadence 2008-03-04 ch 24, | abuseKeep it up. Your poems are very inspirational. :) |