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| Sarah Allie 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseVERY nice :) I like how you incorporated pet names like Honey, Baby, and the like into the story. Very innovative theme, good job! Sarah :) x |
| Sendo1920 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseO.o remind me to not get on your bad side. O.o That was a good poem, expressed alot and made me shiver. Nicely done! |
| Emotastic Hannah 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is dark, but I love it. The repitition of the title and the fact that I can see this going on are great! Keep it up! |