shame on you breaking rules (hehe computer class is so easy and boring and slow)

but i do like this collection quite a bit, even if YOU dont seem to... continue please :)

i would consider this writing about 'life', but maybe that's just me. anyway, i like them. i just want to say, about this 'subject/preposition/predicate' thing: have you ever heard of 'poetic liscence'? it's where poets are allowed to write however they feel like. there are no rules.

...ok...i'm done...

-ALTA

Wow! This one...I can't really find the words to explain how I felt while reading this. It's so amazing!

Let's forget this. All of it. The last thing I want you to do is stop writing. I don't want you to apoligize because you did nothing wrong. Don't make an attempt to correct what happened. AND your poetry ISN'T stupid. I know how much writing can help with the stress everyday life. I should be the one apoligizing for taking every word you wrote to heart. I'll try to be more understanding about what you write, and I promise I will read what you write. I know you love me. I love you too.

This will all be alright

As long as you're still

MY princess

And as for a review. The entire piece is well done. "Devon" found a less creative format, but I can assume that you were writing and not worrying about the technicalities. Either way, keep it up.

- Devon

(You can call me ANYTIME you want to.)

Oh, that was good! It'll go in my favorites! You were so true to yourself and you expressed your feeling so well! I really liked how you ended the poem, with that question! And how the whole poem was like a letter to that person. I hope to hear more from you soon!

The Reverse Edge Blade

This was different from what I've seen from you before. I liked how short each poem was, and how you'd sorted each of them into one chapter! The words you used to describe your feelings were powerful, and I liked how you wrote the headlines for each poem!

Great job, this will go in my favorites! Keep at it and write more!

The Reverse Edge Blade