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DRZHazel13 2009-11-07 . chapter 28
plz plz plz plz plz keep wrting im begging so much i think ill go crazy if u dont!
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 28
No way. You didn't just do that. You did NOT just do that!

Okay. Okay. Control the temper. You will update soon, or I will be forced to hit you with a wet noodle. Not a proposal noodle, either.
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 19
"He teaches math! That's not a sexy subject, he's not even sexy!" HAHA WIN!

But yo, Gilda, she needs to STFU like now. Seriously. She should get some friends before she gets in Lily's face.
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 18
PFFT HAHAHAH wow good job guys way to get it on with Lily's best friend in the other room! Hahahahah best awkward sex scene moment ever.
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 17
Just saying, I see nothing wrong with the flashing of the peace sign as a welcoming at Wal-Mart. If every Wal-Mart did that, I'd go there more often!
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 16
...What? I'm sorry, I think I must be mistaken. Did...did you...did you just say...PREGNANT?? *drops to knees and howls to the sky* NO!

On a totally different note, I basically died when I read "Are you gay?" "Excuse me?"

But Lily's got quite a temper!
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 15
Kyle Brooks is so cute when he's not an asshole. The end.

OH MY GOD HER PARENTS ARE FREAKING...THERE IS NO WORD BAD ENOUGH! Like, seriously?? Are you joking?! Oh, just $50,0, no worries. REALLY?? And it's like "Yeah, so, I'm moving out." "Oh, do you need any help??" BAH! Terrible parents, I tell you!
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 14
Go away, Garrett, thanks. But seriously, no thanks on the last line: "You'll come running back. They always do." Blech *shakes head* not a good one to leave on, G-man. Not a good idea.

But yeah, I would get pissed if I was Lily too. Like, I didn't think she was being immature that time! Jeez, why's everyone so mean to her??

Just kidding :). By the way, your story's distracting me from a World Studies project that I really should be doing, considering it's due tomorrow. Thanks for that.
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 13
Oh, GOD, Lily! Stop getting into fights! *cries* They were so cute, too!!
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 12
When the X-Ray guy was like "Don't have sex. It'll kill you.", all I could think of was Mean Girls.

"Don't have sex. Because you WILL get pregnant. And die."
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 11
NO. FREAKING. WAY.

Okay I can't even write a full review. I need to keep going.

BRBTHNX.
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 10
*grabs hair* AGH GOD KIT CHILL THE FRICK OUT! Dang, girl, calm down! How could she NOT be totally enthralled??

But I laughed so hard when it was like "Are we going to get shot Kyle?" "No." "Are you sure?" "No." Hahahahah funny stuff!

By the way, sorry I'm reviewing too much. There's just far too much awesomeness for me to sit quietly and not freak out on the reviews page :).
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 8
FINALLY, THEY KISS! FINALLY! Now I can die happily!

...I'm still reading though.
love-forever 2009-10-18 . chapter 7
I can't decide between "AWW" and "GAH!" Like GAH because Scarlett really needs to just get out of their lives. Like now. She's just screwing everything up. But AWW because he said he enjoyed it!! SO CUTE! ...But then why was he all up in Scarlett's grill?

So confusing (in a good way, not bad confusing)! ...I'll just read the next chapter now ;)
love-forever 2009-10-16 . chapter 6
Hahahaha funny chapter! (Sorry I keep reviewing over and over again...for every chapter...)

"Oh, snap, I feel like I need to wash my hands!"
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