nice.
this is a pretty good story so far... and i love 'The Three Musketeers'!! haha
update soon please! :D

Good chapter! I know this one is actually still a sort of intro to the main characters of the story, but what really got me interested was the prologue. It's awesome. I can't wait til it happens!

Keep up the great writing!

You know, I've always had an inordinate obsession with the name Sebastian. :-) Anyway, I like this story so far. I'm not into modelling or anything, and for some reason the idea of a writing camp doesn't appeal to me, but I like what you've done with Alli and with the camp. It looks like a fun story. I noticed a few grammar errors, but that might be because you said you're just writing it for writer's block, and you'd probably pick up on them if you ever edit it, so, yeah. I like it!

Great prologue. It definitely makes the story more exciting. I hope you're posting more soon! :)

*Looks at you hopefully* Update?

I really like this story so far. Alli's a pretty cool character because she has lots of flaws but still comes off as likeable. I already think Melinda's a bitch, and is shaping up to be a huge stone in Alli's shoe. I hope you haven't given this story up... I'd really like to see where it's going!

Very interesting story. I can't wait to read more (please say you're still writing it!). I love your writing. :)

oh this is gonna be interesting, isn't it? can't wait for more ~ Alenor.

I'm already liking Alli. Well, her more than Melinda at least.

:) CD

i love it...of course. there were a couple spelling mistakes towards the beginning, but other than that it was fine. I can't wait to find out what sebastian's all about

Oh Sebastian sounds interesting. Sebastian v. Jeremy...hm

Lovely! I'm curious about the rest, the story has loads of potential. Great job and hope you'll update soon!
xo Hope

Yay! Another story! Life is beautiful was awesome, and this one's pretty good so far...Please update soon! :D

nice! hot new camper, yum! lol

I'm really impressed with this story so far. This chapter is a lot better than the other one and you've set a pace for the story already. Keep it up!