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Reviews For: Slipping Away

lilacribbon
2007-09-23
ch 1,
LOVE IT!
Sweetie, was this one of the ones in your folio? Wait, don't answer it is, I just remembered. And now I'm going to read your other ones and maybe one day i will get my lazy but around to posting mine!
Luv u
theauxiliarycompanion
2007-09-22
ch 1,
I like your version of what happens after death... well the way to it. There is no sure destination revealed but it seems positive; aside from the overall gloomy mood that this piece is set. You've done well and I can't wait the three (and completely unnecessary) days until I can post my works so you can see what I write. Great job. And remember, every word is practice for your masterpiece.

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-TAC
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