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| de wolf 2007-09-24 ch 3, anon. | abusei'm impressed by this story. it's very well written, good vocab, shows good research done. only criticism might just be the dialogue, it seems a little bit off...i'm not sure how though. i'm sorry if that sounds vague. but on the whole very good and i'm very impressed by it. |
| hafsol 2007-09-23 ch 2,  | abuseWow this is great. I just love your style. It's quite clever. Can't wait for an update. |
| A.K.Alloren 2007-09-23 ch 2, | abuseI am massively amused. I read Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 in quite a frezy. ^_^ So where's the rest? Your vocabulary is marvelous, and I think you set up the imagery and time period quite nicely. Wonderful job!! |