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| WyrdWolf 2007-10-04 ch 1,  | abuseWell, this is a very blunt look at a common phrase. Interesting; no one does it enough. Nothing inspiring, but entertaining, sure. Wolfie |
| felicia13 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseCan't say I'm incredibly fond of this, Bread, old chap. You have two commas and one period and that's just not right. More belong scattered about this poem (just because there's a line break, it's not ok to leave off the commas). Rawr. Sometimes you make me sad. Felicia. |