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Reviews For: It Happens

WyrdWolf
2007-10-04
ch 1,
abuseWell, this is a very blunt look at a common phrase. Interesting; no one does it enough. Nothing inspiring, but entertaining, sure.

Wolfie
felicia13
2007-09-30
ch 1,
abuseCan't say I'm incredibly fond of this, Bread, old chap. You have two commas and one period and that's just not right. More belong scattered about this poem (just because there's a line break, it's not ok to leave off the commas). Rawr.

Sometimes you make me sad.

Felicia.
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