Very powerful. Beautiful writing.

I'm not sure what your purpose was when you wrote this, or what things you might be reflecting on, but it feels so real. The fact that your language and writing style are both brilliant definitely shone through ^^, I really really loved it. Oh and just one more thing, I'm a sucker for those cycled stories, where the ending connects to the title, for some reason it just makes a story seem much more whole. Keep it up, I'm waiting to read more!