good job! i am in the process of letting go of my boyfriend...actually, i wrote about him in two of my writings 'Dear Love From Your Girlfriend' & 'What Lies Beneath The Smile' please read and review...it's hard to say goodbye.

'Ello Guv,
Again, a really fantaistical poem. See if you can make you lines rhyme it kinda make the poem more appealing, and make your words flow together more. But your meaning got through easily so I applaude ya.
Bye Guv!