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Taige
2008-01-09
ch 1, 		abuseA) check your spelling.
B) An interesting poem-y thing. The bold/underlined/caps words standout to give an overall feeling to the piece that is kind of sad. The fact that the narrator cannot forget adds an interesting twist.

I especially like the "have a nice day".
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