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| xoyingying 2008-06-20 ch 1,  | abuseOMG THAT IS ADORABLE! |
| mia5081 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was wicked sweet! Loved it :D ~Mia |
| Jevanminx 2007-10-29 ch 2, | abuseSuch an indeniably cute fic. JM |
| avidbookworm 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseawe... so sweet. this story is really nice. :D |
| AmberMarieee 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is so adorable. Cute story, I love it. |
| 77-LiLiAnA-77 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseIt would be awesome if that happened to me ( well, I'm not in love with my best friend at all, but still)! Loved the mini epilogue! |
| RoseLife 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseAWW SO CUTE! I absolutely loved it! THE ENDING RULED XD Great job! keep it up =P ~RL~ |
| Sydney-J 14 2007-09-24 ch 2, | abuseI liked this story, like the game too |
| HaPpYGuRl 2007-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was cute!Luvd it! |
| Pop the Bubble 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseaww.. that was so sweet! i loved the last part, in the elevator again =] xx |
| SparklingStar25 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abusesweet |
| milenaa 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was well-written and very funny, even if it's predictable and cliché. You've got your characters well-developed and the feeling of their friendship can be easily picked up. One thing I'd suggest would be to try to describe the characters they mention while playing DFM instead of explaining who they are with parenthesis (gosh, I'm never sure how to spell it exactly, lol). Good job! |
| The Latest Plague 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was REALLY cheesy, but I just happen to like cheese. lol I'm adding you to my C2. :) |
| eyesoar 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abusei loved it, SO CUTE(L). its one of those stories that just makes you feel good |
| TwinkleHeart 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseAW! |