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Reviews For: Dreams and Luck

nice guy
2008-06-07
ch 1, anon.
abusewow you have got of 2 a brill start keep telling
i wana knoe more!
pugger
2008-05-28
ch 26, anon.
abusemore
puggers
2008-05-28
ch 2, anon.
abusethis is really good you should publish it. I mean it seriously. Riannon sounds like she so annoying it will make a sum1 explode
idioy
2008-05-28
ch 1, anon.
abusekool m8 really gd
puggers
Nature Prince
2007-12-04
ch 1,
abuseHow many characters?!
Lol I'm confused.
So you're saying that Chris is a Sex God?
Why, thank you for that.
Lovely, as George would say, being George.
The character of Pete rox!
Put more of him in!
love,
Chris x
X-SpOrKo-X
2007-09-30
ch 9,
abusewow your style is really good, like a diary entry for everyone!! Cant wait to find out what happens next
Keep writing!
writing.life.2.4
2007-09-25
ch 8,
abuseit took me a few chapters to understand your writing style but now that i do all i have to say is well done. i've yet to see another story like this on fictionpress where it just shows the characters points of view with not much plot, its a really cool way to put out a story. well done!
angelparadise
2007-09-24
ch 3,
abuseLana's a bit of a maneater, but in this case, it's one guy.
angelparadise
2007-09-24
ch 2,
abuseChris doesn't like his sister, and he is very poetic.
angelparadise
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abuseRoxy is just a really pretty girl, who likes Chris a lot.
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