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| nice guy 2008-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abusewow you have got of 2 a brill start keep telling i wana knoe more! |
| pugger 2008-05-28 ch 26, anon. | abusemore |
| puggers 2008-05-28 ch 2, anon. | abusethis is really good you should publish it. I mean it seriously. Riannon sounds like she so annoying it will make a sum1 explode |
| idioy 2008-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abusekool m8 really gd puggers |
| Nature Prince 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseHow many characters?! Lol I'm confused. So you're saying that Chris is a Sex God? Why, thank you for that. Lovely, as George would say, being George. The character of Pete rox! Put more of him in! love, Chris x |
| X-SpOrKo-X 2007-09-30 ch 9, | abusewow your style is really good, like a diary entry for everyone!! Cant wait to find out what happens next Keep writing! |
| writing.life.2.4 2007-09-25 ch 8, | abuseit took me a few chapters to understand your writing style but now that i do all i have to say is well done. i've yet to see another story like this on fictionpress where it just shows the characters points of view with not much plot, its a really cool way to put out a story. well done! |
| angelparadise 2007-09-24 ch 3, | abuseLana's a bit of a maneater, but in this case, it's one guy. |
| angelparadise 2007-09-24 ch 2, | abuseChris doesn't like his sister, and he is very poetic. |
| angelparadise 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseRoxy is just a really pretty girl, who likes Chris a lot. |