I love this story 'nough said...

This story clearly shows potential =)
I hope you will update soon

I absolutely love this story! Any chance of you completeing it??

The story is really getting exciting~

oh i do hope its just a premonition death is too sad!!

wow... intense. i like this. update soon!

I'm a little confused right now. I guess it's because I don't know how all the characters relate to each other yet. But since I am familiar with your writing (His Mistress), I have faith that this one will be a good once all the players are introduced. Please continue.

too cool! u must update!!

I've always adored your stories. I don't think you know this, but I've read them all. The beginning of this story is very intriguing, especially the relationship between the husband and queen... I am very, very intrigued. Please update soon.

A little lost ... but it seems to have a good momentum - Will look forward to the next chapter :)