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Reviews For: fear of falling
Twilight Starr 2007-11-27 . chapter 1
I love the last sentence. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~
ten pts above average 2007-10-29 . chapter 1
I really LOVE the lines "your farr too beautiful to be real" and "your face is perfect for sleepless nights". WOW.
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