Yay for finally updating!
Yay for finally reviewing! (even though it's only been one day! – not anymore. Sorry! It had only been one day when I started reviewing at least)

I'm sorry, but after spending all week with the two drama Peters I'm having trouble thinking of anyone else when I see the name Peter. It's kind of annoying.
*deep breath*... remove all real-life peters from your mind... Okay! Now I'm ready to read it... I hope. (this was a part of the original comment, which I’m pretty sure you read when you weren’t supposed to be looking at what I was writing, and which doesn’t apply now since I haven’t been spending several hours every day with the two drama Peters recently)

Why is he chopping wood in the middle of a storm?! (NOT SOTRM!) It makes not sense! Is he trying to get himself killed?!

I used to know whether Beatrice was going to die. Now I have no idea whether or not you decided to let her live. I know she dies in real life. Does that count?

Isn't peter older than Hans? Shouldn't Hans be answering to Peter? Why won’t Peter step up? Why does Hans have to do it for him?

TYPO!:"Out savior Mickey" HaHa! TYPOES!

Don't Call Hans A Bastard! YOU'RE A Bastard!

"Your point?' Peter asked." - this remind me of when Dick Cheney (our very own vice president of the United States) was told that two-thirds of Americans say the war in Iraq is not worth fighting, and all he had to say about it was, “So?”

It’s a long story…. That sounds like a set up to an interesting backstory. If you don’t elaborate I will be very mad. *glares and pouts at the same time*

WOAH! That’s harsh. Refuse to amount to anything?! Talk about hitting below the belt!

The Jews think the Germans are scum now? Wait a few years. You’ll see how much the Germans hate you too.

I feel so bad for Peter. It’s like this entire chapter is designed to be a giant Peter Pity Party. (yay for alliteration!) First he has to cope with his grief over his dying little sister, then he has to deal with supposedly saintly Mickey overshadowing him, then he is told that he refuses to amount to anything, then his little brother is sold into slavery and there’s noting that can be done about it, and then he tells himself that he never even had any honor to be able to lose, what’s next? A suicide attempt?! - NO! Not a suicide attempt! That was sarcasm, not a suggestion! (unlike the time I told you to kill the pathetic helpless little girl)

I’m sorry, but I was just randomly reminded of when we were sitting at lunch talking about Peter and your story and Katelyn says, all sly-like, “I bet I know why she named him peter” and then she felt really stupid when you said it was because that was his name – he’s your great grandfather. I loved that. Okay, just had to tell you because it popped into my head.

Yay for chapters with Nat!

And now I will review A Survey With Exavier Lordy and A Survey With Enver Lorfselbanger.

Okay, I'm going to skip the part where I apologize for taking so long to review because you've already heard it a million times and (hopefully) you alrealy know how bad I feel about it. : (

On with the review! (again just putting down whatever pops into my head as I read)

I love that line - Bavaria was much lerger than he thought. HeeHee. Things are never quite as small as they seem when you see them on maps.
His hair was mostly grey, but what was it other than grey that it was not mostly? (des that make sense?)
The castly sounds pretty. I wanna live in a castle!
AH! =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D
IT'S VICTOR! =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D ..
*EXCITED SQUEAL* (I just want to let you know that this is not just me exaggerating my reaction in my comment just because I can. This is actually how I reacted when I saw - can't really say heard - him say that his name was Victor)
Tell Warner that he cannot ignore the slice on Victor's lip! It's a horrible case of child abuse and Victor must be rescued from his terrible situation! (unles of course you want to give him a dramatic tragic death instead)
It's funny that Victor claims to be "far from fluent" in the English language, while speaking in the English language. (I know, I know, pretend he's speaking German, but it's still funny)
HOW are you supposed to pronounce Berchtesgaden?! And is that really where he was from, or just some random place in Southern Bavaria? (I'm assuming that you put enough time in to at least make sure that it was, in fact, a real place in Southern Bavaria)
Of course Warner can't help liking Victor. No one can help liking Victor. It's VICTOR!
I love how they spell it Wilhelm. Sorry, I know that was random, but I just think it's funny.
Why does Victor have a limp?! I blame Wilhelm! You are just making me so sad about poor Victor. I think Victor needs a hug. I wanna give him a hug. Can I give him a hug?
- I foud a Typo: "...there was no was Peter would ..." Just thought I'd let you know. -
Poor Frank! He's going to have to work for ten years. He won't get out till he's Sixteen! And then after all that, Beatrice dies anyways!
Who is Lorelei exactly? I do not believe she was in the other version. Gah! Characters I don't recognize!
Now I feel bad for Warner. His family will hate him and it will haunt him until the day he dies?! This story is so sad and depressing! But that's okay, I guess. I like sad stories.
I couldn't immagine not being able to afford having hot chocolate anytime I wanted. I can barely live not being able to have hot chocolate whenever we're out of Milk!
Is Hans old enough to deal with the brunt of everything falling on him? It's a huge responsibility. I'm surprised that even Mickey survived it. Wait! Why can't it all fall on Peter? Why isn't Peter in charge of comforting the disgruntled parents? Why does Hans have to do it?
LOL! Frank wants a puppy!
D= *Saddness* D=

I LOVE IT!
I will not be able to review your other story right now, since I am supposed to be going to bed, but I will do it tomorrow! Remind me.

Richard:Yes, I'm first this time. Thank you for finally updating! It took you long enough. It was worth it. I loved this chapter! You got Hanschen from Spring Awakening, didn't you? I knew I loved you for some reason. =P I want to live in a mansion. Why do they get to live in a Mansion? So this is the Victor we've heard so much about. He's cool. His dad abuses him though, doesn't he? I do not like Wilhelm, even though he is a bad guy. He's just pure evil. Maybe if he had a billowing cape of doom...
This maid...Lorelei- they like eachother, don't they(her and Victor. Wilhelm would just be creepy)? Is she a slave too? That could definately make some drama. Look at how I am analyzing the story. And my english teacher says I'm hopeless at this sort of thing. How could he sell his own son? Let Beatrice die, come on! I know this is something that actually happened, which just makes it even worse!

I like the mom. She's nice. I feel sorry for her(yes, I do have a soft side). Hans is amazing. He is my second favorite character after Nat. Mickey would be, but Steph is going all fangirl-y. Maybe if he goes all psycho like how you said he does, he will get moved up. I haven't had hot chocolate in years. Why must it usually be so warm down here(though it's been freezing lately!!)? Frank is amazing for just one line,"Can I have a puppy?" I'm guessing that it won't happen though. Poor him. We need more Peter. Will he be in the next chapter, or will it be Nat? Alright... that's about it. I am so sorry this comment is so long(and it's gonna get longer).
Update!

Steph: Ok, so Richard went first. Bad idea. He stole almost all my comments. I feel kinda bad for Warner. He was only trying to save his family. Plus, he's obviously guilty. May I say, I love Victor. Not as much as Mickey though. Either way, Victor is amazing. He had a limp? How dare his dad hurt him. We must kill Wilhelm!

And Victor must marry Lorelei. They seem cute together, though I have to get to know the character more before I decide. Is she an indentured servant? Are there any others? Once again, don't be too ** Warner. Catherine is amazing. I like her. i hope things work out for her, or will she die? Hans is amazing too. I would die if all the responcibility was pushed on me all at once. We need more Peter though. That's about it. Upadate soon, and add more peter. And Nat. He's only had one chapter. And Mickey(no need to explain why).

Love Richard and Stephanie. =D (Yay for long reviews!) Tell us what your friend Sarah has to say about this(or if you are reading this Sarah(aka-the other reviewer) what do you have to say? If you are reading this Sarah, I(Steph) promise to read and review your stories when i can. We're lucky we had time to review this. Richard may, but I doubt it. He is to lazy. Remember, he won't even get his own account!) Bye!

Hello, it's Steph!
Cool Story! This is from your dads side of the family, right? Wow, his family had no luck, didn't they? Like our side was any better though. Well, Rich and I got an account, just to review your story. See- I'm reviewing!

This is awesome! Mickey is my love. If he wasn't you're great great uncle, and wasn't, you know, dead, I'd probably marry him. Maybe it's just me, but I picture Jack Davenport as him. IDK why, but I ain't complaining. Hey, Mickey is a hot green eyed brunette, JacDav is a hot green eyed brunette. It's win-win. When does he meen Nat? It'll probably be hilarious.

Nat is my idol. Musician hm? I wonder why you chose that profession? I read your other reviews- you were gonna kill him? Why? He is the most amazing character ever. Latin sucks, god I wish I could do what he did. That's horrible Latin by the way. I know you can't speak a word of it, but I must tell the truth. Trust me, I take it.
And who the hell is Victor? I want to know! Update so I can find out!! I don't want to cheat and read your old story.

What else? Umm...Hans is adorable. Reminds me alot of Richard and Seanie. Peter is a jerk, but you told me what he did later on, so he is my personal hero. I picture Peter from heroes here, but it's probably just the name.
Frank- poor great-grandpa frank. He probably has no idea what the hell is going on, does he?

Hola cuz! It's Rich!
Beatrice= Let her live a while, be paralysed, then kapow! She suddenly dies. Ya, on Christmas! Muhahahahaha! Sorry. It would be a plot twist. You know you like it. Mickey is cool, but Steph is going insane, rambling on about how hot he probably was. I hate you for that.

Band geeks rule. The violin/fiddle is here, supporting your cause. Crap, now Steph is singing "He plays the Violin". I hate my life. Why did mom have to introduce us to 1776? I will never live down the violin and the whole Richard 'Henry Lee' thing. Anyway... Clarinet? I guess there are worse, like piccolo's!
Peter rules. Frank is gonna be sold into slavery, right? Wow, that sounds wrong, esp. from me. Descendants of plantation owners at your service lol. Hans... im not sure what happens to him. Didn't he go to America after Mickey? Please don't let Victor be a cool 'hot' character. Steph's fantasies of Mickey are bad enough.

Sorry this is so long, but we do have five chapters to make up for. Anyway, update soon! It's been over a month for gods sake! Introduce Victor for me (Stephanie), make Mickey happy(Stephanie), and kill Beatrice!(Richard)

Love,
Stephanie and Richard!(who is to lazy to get his own account, so insists that he type his opinions on mine. I guess we have a shared account now. Be prepared for long reviews then!)
PS:How are the snow storms? He he he.

(Okay, this is me just writing down whatever pops into my head as I read it, so bear with me)

Wolves! I love wolves!
I love the comment about her not having anything to deserve it. Not much to say about why I love it, I just do.
HeeHee. He fell out of his seet. : )
How much luggage do they have? He must be pretty strong to be able to carry both the luggage and her at the same time.
Aw Peter. : ( Why is Peter affraid of angry Mickey? What did angry Mickey do to poor Peter? *Glares at angry Mickey* Poor Peter. And how come Mickey can controle himself around the random mean information-desk man and not around Peter?
I like the part about Mickey the poor farmer being better dressed than the big-city cab driver.
Mate! He said mate! I love it when people say mate! It sounds so funny and accent-ish!
Can she maybe not die? It would just be so sad for Mickey if she died. Maybe she could get better, but end up paralized. Would that be tragic enough? (Ignore my begging, I love tragic stories. Kill the pathetic helpless little girl! Cruch Mickey's heart! Drama!Drama!Drama!)
VICTOR! ! ! ! ! ! !

Sorry it took me so long to review. (I know I've already given you my excuses, but I'm repeating them now anyways) I was ignoring my inbox for a week - which reminds me, I have a lot of emails that I need to be getting to - and then I had the week of Drama Club, which you totally know is true, so you can't even say that that's not a valid excuse! Blame the Drama Club!
Update Soon! And then maybe I'll update my story! - MAYBE! Don't hold me to that.

DRAMA!
I'm so excited you went with my idea and had him kill (or have killed) Nat's father. Yay for plot twists! (even if I knew they were coming, they're still exciting!)


Sorry it took me this long to review. I've been pretty busy, but I did get to it, and I did love it! ! !

HeeHeeHee... I love Nat!
I hereby officially proclaim him a COOL band geek! As awesome as it would have been if he died, I've decided that I'm happy you're going to let him live.
I loved the way he stood up to the latin teacher, and the little victory dance that followed. I also liked the bit about believing in God, but not the church, that's a really good way to put it. Poor Nat's Dad. Is the headmaster gonna come back later with some way for Nat to pay him back? Clarinet hm? He couldn't get one of the good instruments? How can music be naughty? Did it have a dance or something that went along with it? Is that a real piece of music? I might Google it. I wonder where Nat works.

It is awesome! I commented a lot this time. See? (see above)
Update Soon! See you tomorrow! (unless you don't get this until Firday, in which case I'll see you Monday!)

OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
(I'm feeling a little enthusiastic, if you couldn't tell)
You remember how on the first chapter of the other version I said that it was kindof hard to keep the characters straight because there where so many of them? Well, this time there are just as many characters, and not only can I keep them all straight, I can tell you at least three thigs about each of them without even looking! (I won't now, but I can)

So this means that you're dropping the other version entirely and just doing this one instead?

I'm happy I could influence you to keep Nat alive. He's cool. He's worth keeping alive.
I really like the way you did this - like, seriously, awesome! Great descriptions, great set-up, great the-way-you-chenged-it-to-starting-with-him-coming-to-America-instead-of-building-up-to-him-going-to-America. (I'm assuming it'll start flashing-back soon. Tell me if I'm wrong)

Anyways, Awesome!Awesome!Awesome! And Update Soon!