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| Twilight Starr 2008-03-02 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseWow...this one touched me. I'd tell you about what it means to me, but what it means to me is very personal, so please don't take it the wrong way when I don't tell you. This was beautifully written. Kudos. |
| Vester 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was slightly choppy, less flowy than the other one. It was good but maybe blend some stuff together instead of seperating it so often. Altogether, another thumbs up! |