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SecretlyAmused
2008-06-22
ch 5,
abuseHey... I read the first few chapters some months ago and just read the latest one right now. I'm looking forward to reading about Kale finding out, whenever it happens, and I think the plot's very interesting... hope you update soon!
rachely
2008-05-19
ch 5,
abuseThis is really great. :) I can't wait until more is up. =D
curious.soul
2008-04-20
ch 5,
abusecute! easy to read with interesting characters
i find greg's intentions a little fishy but i'm sure that'll be resolved sooner or later
and isn't kale a sweetheart! :)
you might want to tweak the summary- in my opinion it doesn't give this story justice- its a bit too bland
awaiting.rain
2008-03-24
ch 5,
abuseupdate soon!
awaiting.rain
2008-03-24
ch 4,
abusedamn, shes brave and her parents were so nice.
just thinking of telling my parents something like that has me ready to pee my pants.
greg is sweet. i wish he was the daddy.
but kales sweet too. hope he finds out soon.
girl-in-shadows
2008-03-19
ch 5,
abuseLovely chapter! Hope to see more soon! :)
sputnik sweetheart
2008-03-18
ch 5,
abuseLOLOLOL! hahaha, oh man, i was about to stop reading after the pick up line and leave a comment. haha, shut it down! There are so many inside jokes here. And hay! I thought Kale and Lucy were going to read a steamy romance scene together! haha, and this brings me back to reading those harlequin romance novels at the family gathering. I think we should collect them and sell them at Magnifico. Yay! Sorry it took so long for me to review, our internet's working now. KALE!
belle1220
2008-03-17
ch 5,
abuseThis story is great. Extremely well written.

I'm loving your characters so far.
Alenor
2008-03-17
ch 5,
abuseoh i can't wait for more. surely kale remembers that he had sex with her by now?!? honestly. cya next time ~ Alenor.
Ideas 'R' Us
2008-03-16
ch 5,
abuseThis is wonderful.
BLACKBELTSOPHIA
2008-03-16
ch 5,
abuseOMG I love this story! Please update soon, this is really adicting! I wonder if Greg's been cheating on Lucy...wouldn't that be something!
Evenstar1389
2008-03-16
ch 5,
abusenice for the clues to be dropped periodically... If Kale's smart enough he will notice her taste changes and hunger and whatnot...
I wonder if he likes her like she likes him
Oooh.Look.A Cat
2008-03-15
ch 5,
abusehe's gonna find out.
i can feel it
any day now
he'll find out
and how cute
battle in a store
i did that at a toy store with those fake swords
it was fun
but people stared
not that i cared
but...we got kicked out
but it's ohkay for them
coz its kinda like...they work they're
and they arent using books lol
can't wait for more

izzie
Lorango911
2008-03-15
ch 5,
abusedude... that was awesome. i love how in this chapter it would always come back to the book. and Norman? seriously.. how could she not see the appeal in him? He's even letting her pick out his next tattoo.. i think that's sexy... OOBER sexy... oh man.. and Kale is so oblivious it's sickening... she's having his baby for goodness sake. But anyway, the main issue here, is Norman.. i swear he's gay. and really perceptive. oh man.. ok i'm tired so i'll call you later!
Sweet Kisses
2008-02-12
ch 4, anon.
abuseOh, God. I can't even IMAGINE telling my parents that I'm pregnant. They'll either kill me or beat me an inch from death. And then kick me out. It's so scary; she's got guts, I'd have to give her that. Thanks for updating, I've been waiting for this chapter for a long time. (:
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