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| SecretlyAmused 2008-06-22 ch 5, | abuseHey... I read the first few chapters some months ago and just read the latest one right now. I'm looking forward to reading about Kale finding out, whenever it happens, and I think the plot's very interesting... hope you update soon! |
| rachely 2008-05-19 ch 5, | abuseThis is really great. :) I can't wait until more is up. =D |
| curious.soul 2008-04-20 ch 5, | abusecute! easy to read with interesting characters i find greg's intentions a little fishy but i'm sure that'll be resolved sooner or later and isn't kale a sweetheart! :) you might want to tweak the summary- in my opinion it doesn't give this story justice- its a bit too bland |
| awaiting.rain 2008-03-24 ch 5, | abuseupdate soon! |
| awaiting.rain 2008-03-24 ch 4, | abusedamn, shes brave and her parents were so nice. just thinking of telling my parents something like that has me ready to pee my pants. greg is sweet. i wish he was the daddy. but kales sweet too. hope he finds out soon. |
| girl-in-shadows 2008-03-19 ch 5, | abuseLovely chapter! Hope to see more soon! :) |
| sputnik sweetheart 2008-03-18 ch 5, | abuseLOLOLOL! hahaha, oh man, i was about to stop reading after the pick up line and leave a comment. haha, shut it down! There are so many inside jokes here. And hay! I thought Kale and Lucy were going to read a steamy romance scene together! haha, and this brings me back to reading those harlequin romance novels at the family gathering. I think we should collect them and sell them at Magnifico. Yay! Sorry it took so long for me to review, our internet's working now. KALE! |
| belle1220 2008-03-17 ch 5, | abuseThis story is great. Extremely well written. I'm loving your characters so far. |
| Alenor 2008-03-17 ch 5, | abuseoh i can't wait for more. surely kale remembers that he had sex with her by now?!? honestly. cya next time ~ Alenor. |
| Ideas 'R' Us 2008-03-16 ch 5, | abuseThis is wonderful. |
| BLACKBELTSOPHIA 2008-03-16 ch 5, | abuseOMG I love this story! Please update soon, this is really adicting! I wonder if Greg's been cheating on Lucy...wouldn't that be something! |
| Evenstar1389 2008-03-16 ch 5, | abusenice for the clues to be dropped periodically... If Kale's smart enough he will notice her taste changes and hunger and whatnot... I wonder if he likes her like she likes him |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-03-15 ch 5, | abusehe's gonna find out. i can feel it any day now he'll find out and how cute battle in a store i did that at a toy store with those fake swords it was fun but people stared not that i cared but...we got kicked out but it's ohkay for them coz its kinda like...they work they're and they arent using books lol can't wait for more izzie |
| Lorango911 2008-03-15 ch 5, | abusedude... that was awesome. i love how in this chapter it would always come back to the book. and Norman? seriously.. how could she not see the appeal in him? He's even letting her pick out his next tattoo.. i think that's sexy... OOBER sexy... oh man.. and Kale is so oblivious it's sickening... she's having his baby for goodness sake. But anyway, the main issue here, is Norman.. i swear he's gay. and really perceptive. oh man.. ok i'm tired so i'll call you later! |
| Sweet Kisses 2008-02-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh, God. I can't even IMAGINE telling my parents that I'm pregnant. They'll either kill me or beat me an inch from death. And then kick me out. It's so scary; she's got guts, I'd have to give her that. Thanks for updating, I've been waiting for this chapter for a long time. (: |