aw, interesting, i hope you continue

i would like to see how this story would unfoldd

I do hope you post another chapter soon. This story really seems like it has great potential.

i love it. please write more!

fantastic start! i look forward to reading more!

That little cliffie at the end? yeah i don't like it.. UNLES you update within the next three hours i will forever worship you! =) I like the beginning of the story, though!... new plot... unique from what i usually read. so hurry please?!?!?!

very interesting... I like it...cant wait for the next chapter...

fantastic!
a really intriguing and luring beginning.

a promising start! keep up the good work, i can't wait to read more!

Very nice start.

Hey! I like the story so far. The dynamic of hating someone because they broke your heart when you loved them is fantastic. I know what that feels like, actually. However, if I got into a romance with the guy involved now, I think the world might implode, lol. I feel so proud that I actually understand what an Oyster Card is! I went to German camp in Berlin this summer, and my (absolutely fantastic) roommate was from London. So yeah, I picked up a bit of British slang. However, I still maintain that "wicked" is an adverb, not an adjective, and must therefore always be used along with another descriptive word, such as "wicked awesome," "wicked fast," "wicked cool," or "wicked bad." Then again, I'm from Boston, so yeah...

I'm sorry, I'm rambling. Anyway, update soon!

interesting start, update soon!

bec

I really like the plot to your story.
I can't wait for another update.
And... like you said what is an oyster card?
haha

wow, i love the new story! it's an interesting plot! definately can't wait for more!

Abolutely amazing start...this story seems to have a ton of ptential and your writing style is amazing. please update soon