Lol, I like to think that this story is defense of my belief that so much poetry is simply a beautiful paragraph cut into bite sized bits, and that so many paragraphs are simply poetry.

"I'd much rather be a martyr for love than...the killer of a saint"

Perfect.

omg this is going in my favourites

I liked your rhyming, and how you wrote the poem as a small story, and still managed to keep it like a poem! I liked how you expressed your emotions and how you linked the saying "You only hurt the ones you love" to that incident.
I'm sorry to hear about such a thing, really.
But You have a gift there.
The Reverse Edge Blade

You have a rythym in this that is awesome, and beautiful.
[I have a heart, I really do- I know because it's breaking too. And it's shoved up in my throat]
I love that line.
But the rest of the paragraph to me seems to go on and on... like an incomplete thought... and a runon paragraph.
But other then that, I don't think I would change much of anything.

It brings great Angst
To the Rainmaker
That he is not the First
To be Trapped by Convert

For there is the Sunmaster
And his Story is to be Told

Convert traps by Deception
and Fools follow him Blindly
Into Fate