well take a shower frequently (i'm sure you do) xDD

I like it how it's quite sarcastic in the beginning; reminds me of someone who smirks at a funeral (believe me, I have seen one. And no, it wasn't me - that's just disrespectful). The 4th line to the 9th line was a really good example of this. Not only have they disappeared by flesh, they depend on something else to still retain some sense of recognition. And then the shift.. it feels a bit short, but I guess short is never a bad thing. Crisp and straight to the point. I like it. Keep it up =D

I really like the part about the heavy stones on thier head, with names on them because they are unrecognizable. That is a beautiful thought, and you phrased it nicely as well. At the beginning and at the end it felt a bit sarcastic, (e.g. mocking layer of grass) but in the middle more emotional. I was a bit confused as to the tone you were going for.

Beautiful sentiments!

Love,
~Dia