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| kazoua 2008-08-28 ch 4, | abuseAh. THis is cute. A cute story and setting. |
| Carnivale 2008-07-29 ch 4, | abuse*screech* I LOVE it. Lee is SO darling! Iluffhim. And Em sounds like the best friend everyone really wishes they had. I have a sad, sad feeling that this won't be continued... but I'm putting it on my alert list anyway. :] It's absolutely adorable. |
| Bi-curious George 2008-05-05 ch 4, | abuseGo Em! Yay! She won! She's strong, I bet. Yis. Oh, and if you were wondering; that nasty little buzzy bee has gone now. fetid little creature *shudderage*. Erp, yis! This was fun! It was, it was! Erm, Em is funy! Yis! ^^ And And and, uh, yeah! She's going to the partyage too! And she sounds cute too! YAY! Your characters get it all, except that they'll be leaving each other soon :-(. That'll be sad. Erm, this should have mmore reviews; yes, why not? Indeedy do it should. Oh, and how comes you haven't updateaged in so long long long? Eh, update son. Yis Loveage Dust Mowt x |
| Bi-curious George 2008-05-05 ch 3, | abuseHehe! Lee ripped his pants *giggles*. He's so cute ^^. Yes, indeedy. Erm, erm, erm, nice plan of action: run and hope for the best. I love him he's so awesome! And Oo! Joey! Yay! He's cool O_o. And hehehe! He noticed! Woo! Oo, sorry for the slightly longer timeage it took to review this chapter; a wasp flew in the room and I freaked and ran out screaming and had to enlist my little sister's help to get rid of it. It was scaryful O_o. |
| Bi-curious George 2008-05-05 ch 2, | abuseIt didn't get better! IT DIDN'T! *Screams*. But but but, go Em! Take that man-slag down! Yeah! Uh uh, so they get drunk and eat junk food. O_O, oh no, why is this so unjust?? |
| Bi-curious George 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseAdam...chah! Slutty bitch, damn straight! Grr. I likes Lee, I do. But but but, it's so sad!! And I'm only on the first chapter! His best friend is leaving him? No, it's so sad! *Screams in helplessness*. Things had better pick up next chaptereo... |
| the Berserker 2008-01-10 ch 4, | abuse*blub blub blub* last chappie... *sob* |
| the Berserker 2008-01-10 ch 2, | abuseAww. Bless Em's little soul too. *cuddles both tightly* |
| the Berserker 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseAww bless 'is little soul *cooes* Poor Lee Thanks muchly for reviewing Spot the Diff.! Now I'm reviewing back! It's totally worth it - this sounds fantastic already! I love the classic 'I hate him really. No, I really do. I do! Aww bugger it - *snogs him madly*' kinda theme you've got. I love it! |
| sweets555 2008-01-05 ch 4, | abusethis is the only thing i dont like about in-progress stories, im always itching to find out what happens next! it was a good chapter, even if it was a bit of a filler. good job! |
| sweets555 2008-01-05 ch 3, | abusehehe. so cute. this chapter made me giggle, im definitely alerting. |
| sweets555 2008-01-05 ch 2, | abusei love the start, you've done a good job at portraying friendships. good job! |
| xXHaunted CookieXx 2007-11-09 ch 4, | abuseHey! I love your story. I can't wait for the next chapter :) *hands you a lovely inspiration cookie* :D it's sounding really good. I love how you alternate between the two characters and have it mostly focused on their thoughts and such (rather than mine, which is more speech based. bah, I'm kinda lazy :P) good stuff. xXHCXx |
| Quinty 2007-11-06 ch 4, | abusehahaha I loved this chapter! I was extra excited when I saw the alert e-mail! I laughed at the way Em and Nathaniel talked to each other. It didn't seem like a filler chapter to me! I really can't wait for the next update and I can't wait to see what happens at Joey's party! :D |
| hott pink02xx 2007-11-06 ch 4, | abuseHahaha at little wannabe scene boys. This was too short Dx More soon please? |