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Carnivale
2008-07-29
ch 4,
abuse*screech*
I LOVE it.
Lee is SO darling! Iluffhim. And Em sounds like the best friend everyone really wishes they had.
I have a sad, sad feeling that this won't be continued... but I'm putting it on my alert list anyway. :] It's absolutely adorable.
Bi-curious George
2008-05-05
ch 4,
abuseGo Em! Yay! She won! She's strong, I bet. Yis. Oh, and if you were wondering; that nasty little buzzy bee has gone now. fetid little creature *shudderage*.

Erp, yis! This was fun! It was, it was! Erm, Em is funy! Yis! ^^ And And and, uh, yeah! She's going to the partyage too! And she sounds cute too! YAY! Your characters get it all, except that they'll be leaving each other soon :-(. That'll be sad.

Erm, this should have mmore reviews; yes, why not? Indeedy do it should.

Oh, and how comes you haven't updateaged in so long long long? Eh, update son. Yis

Loveage Dust Mowt x
Bi-curious George
2008-05-05
ch 3,
abuseHehe! Lee ripped his pants *giggles*. He's so cute ^^. Yes, indeedy.

Erm, erm, erm, nice plan of action: run and hope for the best. I love him he's so awesome!

And Oo! Joey! Yay! He's cool O_o. And hehehe! He noticed! Woo!

Oo, sorry for the slightly longer timeage it took to review this chapter; a wasp flew in the room and I freaked and ran out screaming and had to enlist my little sister's help to get rid of it. It was scaryful O_o.
Bi-curious George
2008-05-05
ch 2,
abuseIt didn't get better! IT DIDN'T! *Screams*.

But but but, go Em! Take that man-slag down! Yeah!

Uh uh, so they get drunk and eat junk food. O_O, oh no, why is this so unjust??
Bi-curious George
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseAdam...chah! Slutty bitch, damn straight! Grr.

I likes Lee, I do. But but but, it's so sad!! And I'm only on the first chapter! His best friend is leaving him? No, it's so sad!

*Screams in helplessness*.

Things had better pick up next chaptereo...
the Berserker
2008-01-10
ch 4,
abuse*blub blub blub*

last chappie... *sob*
the Berserker
2008-01-10
ch 2,
abuseAww. Bless Em's little soul too.

*cuddles both tightly*
the Berserker
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseAww bless 'is little soul *cooes*

Poor Lee

Thanks muchly for reviewing Spot the Diff.! Now I'm reviewing back! It's totally worth it - this sounds fantastic already! I love the classic 'I hate him really. No, I really do. I do! Aww bugger it - *snogs him madly*' kinda theme you've got. I love it!
sweets555
2008-01-05
ch 4,
abusethis is the only thing i dont like about in-progress stories, im always itching to find out what happens next! it was a good chapter, even if it was a bit of a filler. good job!
sweets555
2008-01-05
ch 3,
abusehehe. so cute. this chapter made me giggle, im definitely alerting.
sweets555
2008-01-05
ch 2,
abusei love the start, you've done a good job at portraying friendships.
good job!
xXHaunted CookieXx
2007-11-09
ch 4,
abuseHey! I love your story. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

*hands you a lovely inspiration cookie*
:D

it's sounding really good. I love how you alternate between the two characters and have it mostly focused on their thoughts and such (rather than mine, which is more speech based. bah, I'm kinda lazy :P)

good stuff.

xXHCXx
Quinty
2007-11-06
ch 4,
abusehahaha I loved this chapter! I was extra excited when I saw the alert e-mail!

I laughed at the way Em and Nathaniel talked to each other. It didn't seem like a filler chapter to me! I really can't wait for the next update and I can't wait to see what happens at Joey's party! :D
hott pink02xx
2007-11-06
ch 4,
abuseHahaha at little wannabe scene boys.
This was too short Dx
More soon please?
hott pink02xx
2007-11-05
ch 3,
abuseHahaha.
I like where this is going.
Write more please??
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