Nice. Another good job. Sorry it took a while to get around to this, but my computers a hooker. Anyways, as I said, I'm not a sci-fi person, but I like your whole idea here. Are you going to do this as a whole collection of oneshots or are you eventually going to turn it into a story? Gah, don't answer that, I'll find out.

Anyways, you made only a few mistakes, ones I can't even remember. I feel you could embellish a little more on some of the concepts, like dark matter and such. Aside from that, I like what you're doing here. By the by, I've got a couple more chapters of Pages of Nightmare up, if your interested. If you don't have the time, don't worry about it though.

Till next time,
-Stewey

Sci-Fi! SWEET! That was awesome, albeit a bit short. I think you could really expand this into a full fledged novel.
Keep up the good work...

This is really interesting. I hope to see the plot develop well as the story goes on. I wonder how the relationship between the two will change.