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| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-17 ch 1,  | abuseThat is really good. It makes me feel bad though. = ( |
| Faith Adeline 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abusewow, this is an awesome poem. I love it. Keep it up. Faith |
| sylvia's syndrome 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseI really like the first stanza—it’s perfect. It suggests so much and yet leaves a lot of room for thought. And while I see that you wanted this to be rough and bare and maybe even a little shocking, I think that your diction could have been more artistic and still just as rough. I guess it just got a little to matter-of-fact sounding for my taste. However, this is an excellent piece on the whole and I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work! |