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smile for the sunshine
2007-11-17
ch 1,
abuseThat is really good. It makes me feel bad though. = (
Faith Adeline
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abusewow, this is an awesome poem. I love it. Keep it up.
Faith
sylvia's syndrome
2007-09-23
ch 1,
abuseI really like the first stanza—it’s perfect. It suggests so much and yet leaves a lot of room for thought. And while I see that you wanted this to be rough and bare and maybe even a little shocking, I think that your diction could have been more artistic and still just as rough. I guess it just got a little to matter-of-fact sounding for my taste. However, this is an excellent piece on the whole and I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!
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