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| M. Massacre 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseMAN If this were a recorded song I'd obsess over it. I might anyways. I like this, a lot. |
| Ardie 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseIt’s a cold, cold place I’ve been. Six feet under, but I can see the sun shines IN and my head is still held high. i love theose lines when i read a song i try to sing it one thing i noticed with this one is when i sung iti added but one word and itmade it flow a lil bit better its still great but in case you wanna know sing these lines and the one word i added will be in caps above trying andlet me know if it sounds n-e smooter to you buthey i like this so much its on my favs now |
| alexis 2007-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abusewow.. dani i love it. really its amazing. i guess when u actually have a specific person to steal feelings from ur writing gets even better. pft as if that was possible. aww poor erica tho =/. love this tho. you did a great job. |
| Wolf's Night 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseSweet lyric! I think I know who its for, stupid bastard we rly should play operation :P...neways as usal tis awsome |