A good short read. I enjoyed it. You may want to work on your grammar and punctuation though.

Other than that it's a cute love story with a nice message.

Aww, that's so nice... why the hell can't i wright a short story that long? lol

anyway, it's a very nice quick read :) i like very much.

This is a good story, sadly, it's burdened by missing punctuation and poor grammar. I suggest a Beta reader if you want to get ride of that and get the full emotion of the story.

That was so cute! It was good! i liked it a lot...

great write!

Hell, I'm not interesting... Anyway, this portratys your personality perfectly... It's kinda scary how you think you romantic...

What a great story with a bittersweet message. It isn't fair, is it. Whenever you fall the hardest for someone, he doesn't like you, and maybe someone else does but you always feel like it wouldn't be fair to either of you. I love the way you ended it on a hopeful note.

AWW! SO CUTE! i loved it! great job, the ending was awsome!XD

RL

beautiful story, sort of reminds me of this guy i've liked for 5 years :) brilliantly written btw

this is good