I noticed that you updated and I was super excited! Great read so far, poor Mac, but I see great things in their future. Great set up! I didn't notice anything that distracted from the story! Update soon!

This made me chuckle, the innocence of a child and thier simplicity. I like the civil relationship so far about the lord of heaven and the lady.

Absolutely flipping fantastic!

...anyway I thought it was very funny especially at the start when you described the day and some of the children's comments.

More, more!

Yee. I like. Keep on writing this- tis very cool. How many reviews do you have?

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Only three. That's not fair on you. You deserve more...

Eh. I look forward to reading more, so update soon! Or I will... (Trails off, frowns)

Uh...

I'll hit you with a haddock. (Waves haddock in a fairly threatening way*

Cranberry Envelopes

Love the title. This looks like it could be a lot of fun. I like Bubby. I'm really looking forward to the introduction of the lunch box.

Great start and I have to say that your title might just be the best ever! Keep up the great writing.

Whoa...Methos gone female. I never saw that coming.