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sunny-raindrop
2008-08-15
ch 15,
abuseI read it right when you updated but I didn't have an internet connection since then so I couldn't review. But as I know what it means to you, I make my duty now. I LOVED it! Derrick is back at last. :D Update soon!
Cupid's Jinx
2008-08-12
ch 15,
abuse-sigh- It's raining heavily again. Bloody English weather.
-grins- Yayayayayayayay! You updated! Where's he gunna take her? What's gunna happen? C'mon! You're killin' me here!

I seriously can't wait for more. Seriously.

Luff luff
Lyra
-x-
Ty Taco
2008-08-11
ch 15,
abuseLOVED the chapter babe.
LOVE THE STORY!
LOVE YOU!
haha

Can't wait for 16.
xoxoxox,
Ty
Cupid's Jinx
2008-07-15
ch 14,
abuseWow, I'm really sorry to hear about your friend's dad.
Love this, keep up the amuzzling work!

Lyra
-x-
R. A. Grough
2008-07-11
ch 14,
abuse:( What's up with Derrick and Lise? I'm getting the feeling it might be a bit more...hehe.
R. A. Grough
2008-07-11
ch 13,
abuseOh no! Only one more chapter :(
R. A. Grough
2008-07-11
ch 9,
abuseCERRICK
um, yeah.
me gusta.
R. A. Grough
2008-07-11
ch 8,
abuseAH! Wtf? MUST KEEP READING!
R. A. Grough
2008-07-11
ch 7,
abuse:) I'm so happy there's more chapter. Btw, I feel the same way. I at least want to know that people are reading my stories.
roughdiamond5
2008-07-11
ch 14,
abuseAlright, first of all, I.O.U one very belated review (not to mention two PMs, but you wouldn't BELIEVE how my computer is acting, and my family wants to spend a lot of time together...oh, plus mom signed me up for babysitting xP). I'm sorry your life is so frantic, I can't believe your idol would just die like that! And does your mom have to control everything around her? Jeesh...

Now, about the chapter, I did enjoy it, thank you very much. :D Lise actually asked Casey to her table, that's so unexpected! But it was a little bit unfair that I don't even get to know why Derrick's upset. Though the softening glare was kind of a hint. ;) Aww man, you have to do some more! I hope this is your sixth review, so then you can keep typing...well, aside from everything else going on in your life. But still, if you can write something new, something more with Derrick...that'd be fun. :D
R. A. Grough
2008-07-11
ch 3,
abuseDude! You weren't kidding when you said that Twilight, Maximum Ride and Harry Potter had a baby! I pretty much love it. I'm off to keep reading...
sunny-raindrop
2008-07-04
ch 14,
abuseA new chapter?! Unbelievable! :P It's still great, just as the previous ones. I still haven't found the proper word for it. Adorable is quite close to the "perfect world". I mean, the whole of it is just like a pretty snowball. You want to touch it, you want to own it, you want to be in it, you want to hug this little world with all your might. 'Cause it's adorable. It may be short and the updates are far too slow but it's still precious and you can't not have it.

That was the best explanation I could come up with. My duty is over with this review but if I'm needed to this six reviews I'm coming back! xD (Though I don't think I'll be needed.) I'd like to read the next chapter asap. :)
Ty Taco
2008-07-03
ch 14,
abuseLOVE LOVE LOVE!!
This story is so good.
I LOVE the outfit descriptions.
Although...Ellie's needed a pinstriped vest to go along the bermuda's.
lol

I'm getting my degree in Cosmetology and Fashion Studies.
So...I kinda LOVE clothing and make-up and all that Jazz.
lol

Can't wait for the next chapter.
:]

xoxoxoxoxoxox,
Ty

PS-
I WANT MORE DERRICK!
You can't go entire chapters without the man candy!!
GOSH!
lol
Angel-Leigh Jones
2008-07-03
ch 14,
abusehiya

love this chapter. not sure what review this is but it goes towards your six. I hope we get an update soon - i'm really enjoying this story.

angel
S.L. Michaels
2008-06-19
ch 12,
abuseIt wasnt a very action packed chapter but I liked it. :]
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