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| Kusje 2007-09-27 ch 1,  | abuse'charcoal wires' and 'onyx hair' really grabbed me in this poem. I like how your trying new styles. It's very gorgeous :) |
| Teao Girl 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseOoh, pretty colours... I also like the 'hello' at the end, it's like a greeting, or an old friend... it can cover so many possibilities. |
| McKenzie Drestire 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseHaunting in it's simplisity, lovely images. The rhyme tripped it up a bit, i was expecting another one but i suppose it's so short it can forgiven. Can't say i fully understand the content, but the first image made me think of someone phoning someone or something (I don't quite get it) anyways, keep writing. Peaceout, kenzie |