'charcoal wires' and 'onyx hair' really grabbed me in this poem.

I like how your trying new styles. It's very gorgeous :)

Ooh, pretty colours... I also like the 'hello' at the end, it's like a greeting, or an old friend... it can cover so many possibilities.

Haunting in it's simplisity, lovely images. The rhyme tripped it up a bit, i was expecting another one but i suppose it's so short it can forgiven. Can't say i fully understand the content, but the first image made me think of someone phoning someone or something (I don't quite get it) anyways, keep writing.

Peaceout, kenzie