I really like this one: Im thinking monologue! Maybe you could pass it on to a drama person and see what they can do with it - I think it would be really good for you to see something you wrote on stage. Maybe one of the drama peoples from either of your old schools or someone you know through other places. Let me know what you think of the idea.
Wow! I love this, really the "Truth" is a subject I love to discuss and I love how you personified him! In fact if you don't mind, i'll write a poem to compliment this one, as another part of truth!