God, that's adorable! And SO true! My God how true it is.

The title is apt and cute.

Me likey.

That's cute. ^_^

Rebekah

I love it: the way you create the term "un-over". Perfect.

this is beautiful.

This is great. I love your expression "UnOver"... though I like it best the way you wrote it in the title, as if it goes together naturally in your head, rather than your having to pont out how it's been constructed as in "un-over". And I like your imagery - how it comes in short lines, in flashes. It gives the whole poem a fragmented, confused, and slightly desperate edge. Great!