Hello!!
I am reading this while you are sat next to me (which is a bit pointless but anyway!!)
Good story
BYe
PS. I know it was a rubbish review but i can't write reviews to save my life - ask steph if you don't believe me! LOL!

Wait, is this explaining why she is afraid of cars or is it explaining an experience after she's afraid of cars? Why does the father get so mad? Why does the girl die at the end?

intresting not quiet clear but, all the same. I'm reveiwn this coz i'm your friend

Simple, yet very effective and poignant. Great work, I look forward to seeing more from you. This has taken a place in my favourites.

sad ending. but its great.